Issa's Blog
During the month of September I commented on Issa's blog and Sarah's blog. Issa is a 5 year student at PT School in England. The post I commented on was her September 18, 2012 entry. She wrote about the last day playing basketball at school and she thought to herself, had she learned everything she could about basketball? Issa said they had gotten into groups and their first race they had she came in second place but the last game they played her group came in last. Her basketball teacher's name is Tai and she says they all screamed "Thank You!!!" as they ran inside.
Sarah's blog
For Sarah, I commented on her September 27, 2012 blog. Sarah is also a 5 year student at PT School in England. Sarah had posted about her family going to the ocean and how she almost got eaten by a shark! Her mother and her were standing in the water when they noticed a fin circling them! Thankfully her dad threw a dead bloody fish in the ocean for the shark to take and go away, which he did. Sarah said her dad saved their lives that day and even though it was really weird and scary she still had a cool day.
Both of the girls did a great job giving excellent details about their stories and it brought such a vivid image to the reader's mind.
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